1- 3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
29 - 31
26 - 28
"God
V to B:
made
"I will. But
me inwhy
aren't you vulnerable."
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
The day was going, and the tawny sky
1 h2>
Lo giorno se n’andava, e l’aere bruno
[1]
The day wasb going, and the dusky air
1
was taking earthly creatures from their
2 h2>
toglieva li animai che sono in terra
was taking the living things that are on earth
HELL 2
the second Song
weariness, while, alone, the only one, I,
3 h2>
da le fatiche loro; e io sol uno
from their fatigues, and I alone
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was preparing myself for war, to bear
4 h2>
m’apparecchiava a sostener la guerra
[2]
was preparing to sustain the war
the kind of journey, the kind of pity,
5 h2>
sì del cammino e sì de la pietate,
alike of the road, and of the woe
that memory’s going to retrace without err0r.
6 h2>
che ritrarrà la mente che non erra.
which the mind that erreth not shall retrace.
2
HELL 2
the second Song
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O Muses, O high genius, now assist me!
7 h2>
O muse, o alto ingegno, or m’aiutate;
[3]
O Muses, O lofty genius, now assist me!
And you—whatever I saw you’d transcribe:
8 h2>
o mente che scrivesti ciò ch’io vidi,
O mind that didst inscribe that which I saw,
Your greatness will be obvious here, O memory!
9 h2>
qui si parrà la tua nobilitate.
here shall thy nobility appear!
3
HELL 2
the second Song
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1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had
underworld missions .
I don't."
11
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
29 - 31
26 - 28
"God
V to B:
made
"I will. But
me inwhy
aren't you vulnerable."
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
I began: “Poet, now my guide,
10 h2>
Io cominciai: «Poeta che mi guidi,
[4]
I began: -”Poet, that guidest me,
4
first check my strength, for power enough to bother.
11 h2>
guarda la mia virtù s’ell’ è possente,
consider my virtue, if it is sufficient,
HELL 2
the second Song
Is trusting me to the high passage justified?
12 h2>
prima ch’a l’alto passo tu mi fidi.
ere to the deep pass thou trustest me.
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You say Silvius’ parent (that is, his father),
13 h2>
Tu dici che di Silvïo il parente,
[5]
Thou sayest that the parent of Silvius
when he was perishable, went to the deathless
14 h2>
corruttibile ancora, ad immortale
while still corruptible went to the immortal
world alertly, each sense as alive as the other.
15 h2>
secolo andò, e fu sensibilmente.
world and was there in the body.
5
HELL 2
the second Song
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But if evil of every kind’s Antagonist
16 h2>
Però, se l’avversario d’ogne male
[6]
And truly if the Adversary of every ill
was courteous, out of consideration for the high effect
17 h2>
cortese i fu, pensando l’alto effetto
was then courteous, thinking on the high effect
he’d have on doers and deeds to come, well this
18 h2>
ch’uscir dovea di lui, e ‘l chi e ‘l quale
that should proceed from him, and on the Who and the What
6
HELL 2
the second Song
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cannot seem out of order to a man of intellect.
19 h2>
non pare indegno ad omo d’intelletto;
[7]
it seemeth not unmeet to the man of understanding;
Who else, to be spiritual and imperial
20 h2>
ch’e’ fu de l’alma Roma e di suo impero
for in the empyreal heaven he had been chosen
Rome’s father, did empyrean heaven select?
21 h2>
ne l’empireo ciel per padre eletto:
for father of revered Rome and of her empire;
7
HELL 2
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Both the one and the other, truth to tell,
22 h2>
la quale e ‘l quale, a voler dir lo vero,
[8]
both which (to say truth indeed)
were set up as the sacred locality
23 h2>
fu stabilita per lo loco santo
were ordained for the holy place
where the greatest Peter’s successor dwells.
24 h2>
u’ siede il successor del maggior Piero.
where the successor of the greater Peter hath his seat.
8
HELL 2
the second Song
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On this trip—for which you provide the credibility—
25 h2>
Per quest’ andata onde li dai tu vanto,
[9]
Through this going,whereof thou givest him vaunt,
he learned the things to be the vehicle
26 h2>
intese cose che furon cagione
he learned things which were the cause
for his triumph and papal authority.
27 h2>
di sua vittoria e del papale ammanto.
of his victory and of the papal mantle.
9
HELL 2
the second Song
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Later another went—the Chosen Receptacle,
28 h2>
Andovvi poi lo Vas d’elezïone,
[10]
Afterward the Chosen Vessel went thither
for reinforcements for the convictions
29 h2>
per recarne conforto a quella fede
To bring thence comfort to that faith
that begin the way to salvation’s pinnacle.
30 h2>
ch’è principio a la via di salvazione.
which is the beginning of the way of salvation.
10
HELL 2
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But why would I go there? On whose authorization?
31 h2>
Ma io, perché venirvi? o chi ‘l concede?
[11]
But I, why go I thither? or who concedes it?
I am not Aeneas. I am not Paul.
32 h2>
Io non Enëa, io non Paulo sono;
I am not Aeneas, I am not Paul;
Worthy? Me? Not in my—or anyone’s—opinion.
33 h2>
me degno a ciò né io né altri ‘l crede.
me worthy of this, neither I nor others think;
11
HELL 2
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Say I decide to give this journey my all.
34 h2>
Per che, se del venire io m’abbandono,
[12]
wherefore if I give myself up to go,
I’m afraid once I’m there I’ll see I’ve been stupid.
35 h2>
temo che la venuta non sia folle.
I fear lest the going may be mad.
You’re so wise you understand what I don’t say at all.”
36 h2>
Se’ savio ; intendi me’ ch’i’ non ragiono».
Thou art wise, thou understandest better than I speak.”
12
HELL 2
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Like someone who unsalutes what he’d saluted
37 h2>
E qual è quei che disvuol ciò che volle
[13]
And as is he who unwills what he willed,
and has a new thought and changes interests,
38 h2>
e per novi pensier cangia proposta,
and because of new thoughts changes his design,
so that now the beginning’s completely uprooted—
39 h2>
sì che dal cominciar tutto si tolle,
so that he quite withdraws from beginning,
13
HELL 2
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that was me on the beach of that dark slope’s chest,
40 h2>
tal mi fec’ ïo ‘n quella oscura costa,
[14]
such I became on that dark hillside:
reconsidering it to nothing—the mission
41 h2>
perché, pensando, consumai la ‘mpresa
Wherefore in my thought I abandoned the enterprise
that began full of action and zest.
42 h2>
che fu nel cominciar cotanto tosta.
which had been so hasty in the beginning.
14
HELL 2
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4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
29 - 31
26 - 28
"God
V to B:
made
"I will. But
me inwhy
aren't you vulnerable."
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
“Your words, if I’m correct, are an admission,”
43 h2>
«S’i’ ho ben la parola tua intesa»,
[15]
“If I have rightly understood thy speech,”
15
replied that magnificent soul’s ghost,
44 h2>
rispuose del magnanimo quell’ ombra,
replied that shade of the magnanimous one,
HELL 2
the second Song
“that timidity’s insulted your soul into submission,
45 h2>
«l’anima tua è da viltade offesa;
“thy soul is hurt by cowardice,
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which often interferes till it’s got a man engrossed,
46 h2>
la qual molte fïate l’omo ingombra
[16]
Which oftentimes encumbereth a man
then rolls him away from what he has honestly tried:
47 h2>
sì che d’onrata impresa lo rivolve,
So that it turns him back from honorable enterprise,
The beast false shadows spook, no true foot farther goes.
48 h2>
come falso veder bestia quand’ ombra.
as false seeing does a beast when it is startled.
16
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But so that these fears of yours will subside,
49 h2>
Da questa tema acciò che tu ti solve,
[17]
In order that thou loose thee from this fear
I’ll tell you why I came and what I’d comprehended
50 h2>
dirotti perch’ io venni e quel ch’io ‘ntesi
I will tell thee wherefore I have come, and what I heard
that moment that—over you!—I cried.
51 h2>
nel primo punto che di te mi dolvez.
at the first moment that I grieved for thee.
17
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1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
29 - 31
26 - 28
"God
V to B:
made
"I will. But
me inwhy
aren't you vulnerable."
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
I was among the ones who are suspended
52 h2>
Io era tra color che son sospesi,
[18]
I was among those who are suspended,
when a lady beckoned, saintly and spectacular. 18
53 h2>
e donna mi chiamò beata e bella,
and a Lady called me, so blessed and beautiful
HELL 2
the second Song
Command me anything! I demanded.
54 h2>
tal che di comandare io la richiesi.
that I besought her to command.
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Her eyes sent more light than the star.
55 h2>
Lucevan li occhi suoi più che la stella;
[19]
Her eyes were more lucent than the star,
She began to speak—to me—gently and low,
56 h2>
e cominciommi a dir soave e piana,
and she began to speak to me sweet and low,
as she alone can, in the voice all angels acquire.
57 h2>
con angelica voce, in sua favella:
with angelic voice, in her own tongue:
19
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‘O noble Mantuan soul,
58 h2>
“O anima cortese mantoana,
[20]
‘O courteous Mantuan soul,
whose fame in the world proceeds without flux,
59 h2>
di cui la fama ancor nel mondo dura,
of whom the fame yet lasteth in the world,
and will proceed for as far as the world will go,
60 h2>
e durerà quanto ‘l mondo lontana,
and shall last so long as the world endureth,
20
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my friend, but not good luck’s,
61 h2>
l’amico mio, e non de la ventura,
[21]
A friend of mine and not of fortune,
has been to the desert, and is now on
62 h2>
ne la diserta piaggia è impedito
upon the desert hillside is so hindered
his way back—too many setbacks, no guts.
63 h2>
sì nel cammin, che vòlt’ è per paura;
on his road that he has turned for fear,
21
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His sense of direction is so far gone
64 h2>
e temo che non sia già sì smarrito,
[22]
and I am afraid, through that which I have heard of him in
heaven,
my fear is I’ve roused to his rescue too late.
65 h2>
ch’io mi sia tardi al soccorso levata,
Lest already he be so astray
Which is what I’ve heard heaven say about him all along.
66 h2>
per quel ch’i’ ho di lui nel cielo udito.
that I may have risen late to his succor.
22
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Move. Get out your words. Be ornate.
67 h2>
Or movi, e con la tua parola ornata
[23]
Now do thou move, and with thy speech ornate,
Whatever you’ve got that could save him, unlock.
68 h2>
e con ciò c’ha mestieri al suo campare,
and with whatever is needful for his deliverance,
Help him, console me. With his rescued state.
69 h2>
l’aiuta sì ch’i’ ne sia consolata.
assist him so that I may be consoled for him.
23
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I am Beatrice who makes you walk.
70 h2>
I’ son Beatrice che ti faccio andare;
[24]
I am Beatrice who make thee go.
I come from where I cannot wait to be again.
71 h2>
vegno del loco ove tornar disio;
I come from a place whither I desire to return.
Love made me move, and talk.
72 h2>
amor mi mosse, che mi fa parlare.
Love moved me, and makes me speak.
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When I have returned I will often
73 h2>
Quando sarò dinanzi al segnor mio,
[25]
When I shall be before my Lord,
sing my Lord your praises at His throne.’
74 h2>
di te mi loderò sovente a lui”.
I will commend thee often unto him.’
She was silent. And then I began:
75 h2>
Tacette allora, e poi comincia’ io:
Then she was silent, and thereon I began:
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1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
26 - 28
29 - 31
V to B:
"God
"I will. But made
me inwhy
vulnerable."
aren't you
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
‘O lady of the power that alone
76 h2>
“O donna di virtù sola per cui
[26]
‘O Lady of Virtue, thou alone through whom
is why the human race outsoars
77 h2>
l’umana spezie eccede ogne contento
the human race surpasseth all contained
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HELL 2
the second Song
all within heaven’s smallest circle’s zone,
78 h2>
di quel ciel c’ha minor li cerchi sui,
within that heaven which hath the smallest circles!
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they please me so, these commandments of yours,
79 h2>
tanto m’aggrada il tuo comandamento,
[27]
So pleasing unto me is thy command
that if I’d obeyed them already, I’m tardy.
80 h2>
che l’ubidir, se già fosse, m’è tardi;
that to obey it, were it already done, were slow to me.
Merely open to me, whatever they are, your desires.
81 h2>
più non t’è uo’ ch’aprirmi il tuo talento.
Thou hast no need further to open unto me thy will;
27
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But do tell me why so uncowardly
82 h2>
Ma dimmi la cagion che non ti guardi
[28]
but tell me the cause why thou guardest not
descending down into this core here
83 h2>
de lo scender qua giuso in questo centro
thyself from descending down here into this centre,
from wideness you want back to so ardently?’
84 h2>
de l’ampio loco ove tornar tu ardi”.
from the ample place whither thou burnest to return.’
28
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4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
26 - 28
V to B:
"I will. But
why
aren't you
afraid
of Hell?"
3
29 - 31
"God
made
me invulnerable."
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
‘Since it’s your will to know the inner layer,
85 h2>
“Da che tu vuo’ saver cotanto a dentro,
[29]
‘Since thou wishest to know so inwardly,
29
I’ll summarize,’ she answered me,
86 h2>
dirotti brievemente”, mi rispuose,
I will tell thee briefly,’ she replied to me,
HELL 2
the second Song
‘why it is I fearlessly enter the interior.
87 h2>
“perch’ i’ non temo di venir qua entro.
‘wherefore I fear not to come here within.
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One should only fear things in the category
88 h2>
Temer si dee di sole quelle cose
[30]
One ought to fear those things only
Able to Harm—that have a hurtful touch.
89 h2>
c’hanno potenza di fare altrui male;
that have power of doing harm,
Nothing else is scary.
90 h2>
de l’altre no, ché non son paurose.
the others not, for they are not dreadful.
30
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I’m made by God, thanks be to His mercy, such
91 h2>
I’ son fatta da Dio, sua mercé, tale,
[31]
I am made by God, thanks be to him, such that
that I’m somebody your misery doesn’t upset.
92 h2>
che la vostra miseria non mi tange,
Your misery toucheth me not,
Nor do this firestorm’s flames—they can’t get rough.
93 h2>
né fiamma d’esto ‘ncendio non m’assale.
nor doth the flame of this burning assail me.
31
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the second Song
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1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
29 - 31
26 - 28
"God
V to B:
made
"I will. But
me inwhy
aren't you vulnerable."
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
In heaven, a woman of refinement wept
94 h2>
Donna è gentil nel ciel che si compiange
[32]
A gentle Lady is in heaven who hath pity
so long over this blocked life I send you to,
95 h2>
di questo ‘mpedimento ov’ io ti mando,
for this hindrance whereto I send thee,
32
HELL 2
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it broke rules up there too strict to accept.
96 h2>
sì che duro giudicio là sù frange.
so that stern judgment there above she breaketh.
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She called in Lucy, with something for her to do.
97 h2>
Questa chiese Lucia in suo dimando
[33]
She summoned Lucia in her request,
“He needs you now,” she said—“your faithful
98 h2>
e disse:--Or ha bisogno il tuo fedele
and said, “Thy faithful one now hath need
one. And so I entrust him to you.”
99 h2>
di te, e io a te lo raccomando--.
of thee, and unto thee I commend him.”
33
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Lucy, to whom harsh is hateful,
100 h2>
Lucia, nimica di ciascun crudele,
[34]
Lucia, the foe of every cruel one,
got moving, and came to the place
101 h2>
si mosse, e venne al loco dov’ i’ era,
rose and came to the place where I was,
where I sat by Old-Testament Rachel,
102 h2>
che mi sedea con l’antica Rachele.
seated with the ancient Rachel.
34
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and said, “Beatrice, you’re God’s true praise
103 h2>
Disse:--Beatrice, loda di Dio vera,
[35]
She said,”Beatrice, true praise of God,
and not rescuing the one whose love’s undying,
104 h2>
ché non soccorri quei che t’amò tanto,
why dost thou not succor him who so loved thee
who for you left behind the crowd’s popular ways?
105 h2>
ch’uscì per te de la volgare schiera?
that for thee he came forth from the vulgar throng?
35
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Can’t you hear his pitiful crying?
106 h2>
Non odi tu la pieta del suo pianto,
[36]
Dost thou not hear the pity of his plaint?
Or see death attack him by the overflowing river
107 h2>
non vedi tu la morte che ‘l combatte
Dost thou not see the death that combats him
the sea can’t reach, and so takes no pride in?”
108 h2>
su la fiumana ove ‘l mar non ha vanto?--.
beside the stream whereof the sea hath no vaunt?”
36
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No one ever in the world ran swifter
109 h2>
Al mondo non fur mai persone ratte
[37]
In the world never were persons swift
to profit or from pain
110 h2>
a far lor pro o a fuggir lor danno,
to seek their good, and to fly their harm,
than I, once these words were delivered,
111 h2>
com’ io, dopo cotai parole fatte,
as I, after these words were uttered,
37
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left my heavenly seat. Down I came,
112 h2>
venni qua giù del mio beato scanno,
[38]
came here below, from my blessed seat,
all my faith placed in your honest words’ poetry,
113 h2>
fidandomi del tuo parlare onesto,
putting my trust in thy upright speech,
which brings you honor, and the listener the same.’
114 h2>
ch’onora te e quei ch’udito l’hanno”.
which honors thee and them who have heard it.’
38
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And after she’d said this to me,
115 h2>
Poscia che m’ebbe ragionato questo,
[39]
After she had said this to me,
she turned her shining eyes—I could see tears—away,
116 h2>
li occhi lucenti lagrimando volse,
weeping she turned her lucent eyes,
which got me here the more hastily.
117 h2>
per che mi fece del venir più presto.
whereby she made me more speedy in coming.
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1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
29 - 31
26 - 28
"God
V to B:
made
"I will. But
me inwhy
vulnerable."
aren't you
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
And so I came to you. She got her way.
118 h2>
E venni a te così com’ ella volse:
[40]
And I came to thee as she willed.
You face a wild beast. I liberate.
119 h2>
d’inanzi a quella fiera ti levai
Thee have I delivered from that wild beast
40
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(The shortcut up the beautiful mountain’s her prey.)
120 h2>
che del bel monte il corto andar ti tolse.
that took from thee the short ascent of the beautiful
mountain.
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Well? What is it? How, how can you wait?
121 h2>
Dunque: che è? perché, perché restai,
[41]
What is it then?
Why, why dost thou hold back?
How can a heart give cowardice this bad a bed?
122 h2>
perché tanta viltà nel core allette,
why dost thou harbor such cowardice in thy heart?
Why isn’t freedom and fire all that you radiate?
123 h2>
perché ardire e franchezza non hai,
why hast thou not daring and boldness,
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When three such women, each blessèd,
124 h2>
poscia che tai tre donne benedette
[42]
Since three blessed Ladies
look after you from the court that is heaven’s,
125 h2>
curan di te ne la corte del cielo,
care for thee in the court of heaven,
and so much is promised by what I’ve said?”
126 h2>
e ‘l mio parlar tanto ben ti promette?».
and my speech pledges thee such good?”
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1-3
My lonely
preparations
at dusk.
Muses:
help me
write this!
3
4 - 14
I tell Virgil:
"Aeneas and Paul had underworld
missions .
I don't."
11
15 - 17
V: "You're
scared.
Listen to
why
I'm here."
3
18 - 25
"The beautiful
Beatrice appeared
to me in Limbo
and ordered me
to rescue you."
8
29 - 31
26 - 28
"God
V to B:
made
"I will. But
me inwhy
vulnerable."
aren't you
3
afraid
of Hell?"
3
32 - 39
B to V:
"Mary told Lucy,
Lucy told me—
rescue Dante!"
8
40 - 42
V:
"Support
like
this and
you're
timid?"
3
43 - 47
I rouse,
eager again
to go. Virgil's
will is now
mine. I begin
my journey.
5
The way little flowers frost over when it darkens,
127 h2>
Quali fioretti dal notturno gelo
[43]
As flowerets, bent and closed by the chill of night,
43
and slump, and seal up, and then in the white sunlight
128 h2>
chinati e chiusi, poi che ‘l sol li ‘mbianca,
after the sun shines on them
HELL 2
the second Song
open themselves on their stems, and each straightens,
129 h2>
si drizzan tutti aperti in loro stelo,
straighten themselves all open on their stem,
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so with me and my lack of fight.
130 h2>
tal mi fec’ io di mia virtude stanca,
[44]
so I became with my weak virtue,
My heart, like that, filled with such good fire
131 h2>
e tanto buono ardire al cor mi corse,
and such good daring hastened to my heart
I began to speak like a man set free tonight:
132 h2>
ch’i’ cominciai come persona franca:
that I began like one enfranchised:
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“The compassion of my rescuer!
133 h2>
«Oh pietosa colei che mi soccorse!
[45]
“Oh compassionate she who succored me!
The nobility of your obedience
134 h2>
e te cortese ch’ubidisti tosto
and thou courteous who didst speedily obey
to her words (which couldn’t have been truer).
135 h2>
a le vere parole che ti porse!
the true words that she addressed to thee!
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I’ve got a heart now that has to experience
136 h2>
Tu m’hai con disiderio il cor disposto
[46]
Thou by thy words hast so disposed
going there, and it’s thanks to your words’ truths.
137 h2>
sì al venir con le parole tue,
my heart with desire of going,
I’m turned around, I’m back, to where I was at first.
138 h2>
ch’i’ son tornato nel primo proposto.
that I have returned unto my first intent.
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Go: thy will and mine are both in you.
139 h2>
Or va, ch’un sol volere è d’ambedue :
[47]
Go on now, for one sole will is in us both:
You’re leader, you’re master, you’re teacher to me.”
140 h2>
tu duca, tu segnore e tu maestro».
Thou Leader, thou Lord, and thou Master.”
I told him that. And when he was moved to move,
141 h2>
Così li dissi ; e poi che mosso fue,
Thus I said to him; and when he had moved on,
I entered my high—heartless—journey.
142 h2>
intrai per lo cammino alto e silvestro.
I entered along the deep and savage road.
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